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''Did'ja miss me?'' by KunehoKun ''Did'ja miss me?'' by KunehoKun
"Wild ORIGINAL CHARACTER (♀) has appeared!"

So initially, I meant to draw some filler, which turned into me wanting to draw Mario, which I didn't cause I realized I DID draw him recently. That in turn became me wanting to draw one of my original characters, which then became a way to force myself to do traditional art outside of just sketching and a way to practice new (and full-body) poses!

It's been like half a year since I last published a pic of her (or any other OC for that matter IIRC. I'm such a fan-artist. <:\

Anyway, please feel free to critique on the execution of the pose. I don't do back-views too often.
Overall, I think the pose looks really great! It's always nice to see something interesting and dynamic done with gesture. The varied line weights add a lot to the drawing.
A few of minor things:
The left arm seems to start from a little too low down, so I would angle the arm above the elbow a bit higher.
The left foot is a bit confusing at first glance. Maybe you could have added some pads to the bottom so it was clearer we're looking at the underside.
Whilst the face is looking directly sideways, the ears indicate more of a three-quarter view. I'd move the ears a bit closer together to make sure it would be possible for her to look behind her with her head in that position :)
The cartoony style looks really appealing, and you've done a brilliant job of getting across the form and weight of the character.
What do you think?
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Submitted on
December 7, 2012
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